Chase must have recognized the wistfulness in her eyes, because he stood and walked to the edge of the two steps leading into his trailer. “Reno, I can be a gentleman.” He put one booted foot on the step and reached out his hand.

She glanced up into his eyes, and in an instant…

Everything changed.

The look in his beautiful blue eyes startled her: pleading, unsure, and it darn near charmed the shorts off her.

From my new release Chase and Seduction available at Digi Books Cafe while The Wild Rose Press’s website is down for maintenance.

Also, if you’d like to see more six-sentence posts, go to the Six Sentence Sunday blog and check them out!

8 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Rebecca Royce
    May 29th, 2011 at 10:59 am · Link

    So well done. I loved that last line

  2. Lisa Fox
    May 29th, 2011 at 11:12 am · Link

    Aw, that’s so sweet. I love that moment of absolute connection.

  3. Carolyn Rosewood
    May 29th, 2011 at 12:06 pm · Link

    Great last line!

  4. Sarah Grimm
    May 29th, 2011 at 1:41 pm · Link

    Great six, Randi!

    • Bubber
      August 11th, 2014 at 7:54 pm · Link

      Clear, inftemaoivr, simple. Could I send you some e-hugs?

  5. Sandy Nachlinger
    May 29th, 2011 at 5:21 pm · Link

    I love the details: boot on the step, reaching out his hand, glance at his eyes. There’s a lot happening in those six sentences!

  6. Lindsay
    May 29th, 2011 at 7:27 pm · Link

    Great last line

  7. jayel kaye
    May 30th, 2011 at 7:14 pm · Link

    That was really good. Loved her reaction to his honesty

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