Six Sentence Sunday
We live in different worlds. That’s the problem,” Chase said, pointing toward the arena full of fans chanting his name.
“No we don’t,” Reno whispered. “We live in one world, where you and I are the only people who matter.”
He shook his head. The only person who mattered was Reno, and her happiness depended on her moving on. “You’re destined for greater things than a tour bus.”
From Chase and Seduction, available at The Wild Rose Press Wilder Roses catalog
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August 7th, 2011 at 8:26 am · Link
August 7th, 2011 at 9:06 am · Link
Aw, trying to let her down gently. 🙂
August 7th, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link
Greater things than a tour bus, loved this line. Great six.
August 7th, 2011 at 10:17 am · Link
But what does she want Chase!? Love your six!
August 7th, 2011 at 10:38 am · Link
ooh love it. he’s putting her first, but he should ask her what she wants first. need to see how this plays out. gr8 6 !
August 7th, 2011 at 10:40 am · Link
Love how he’s looking after her, destined for greater things than a tour bus. Sweet, loving. Well done. Great six!
August 7th, 2011 at 10:46 am · Link
Self-sacrifice the ultimate show of true love. As writers we seek to “show” our stories instead of tell. Well done. Nice Six.
August 7th, 2011 at 11:24 am · Link
I like how he acknowledges her self-centeredness but also realizes her potential for more. Nice six.
August 7th, 2011 at 11:27 am · Link
Nice conflict here.
August 11th, 2014 at 5:10 pm · Link
Deadly accurate answer. You’ve hit the busylele!
August 7th, 2011 at 11:28 am · Link
Bleh. Sorry! My fingers were moving too fast. Comment should read “Acknowledges her potential for more.” not sure where the first half came from.
August 7th, 2011 at 11:56 am · Link
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August 7th, 2011 at 12:39 pm · Link
An underlying a very raw emotion shines through in this Six! Very NICELY done!
August 7th, 2011 at 1:25 pm · Link
Aww, he loves her!
August 7th, 2011 at 1:36 pm · Link
Man, this really got to me for such a short snippet. Must go look at the sale page now.
August 7th, 2011 at 2:44 pm · Link
It always pisses me off when one person wants to make the decisions for both. He needs to let her have a say!!
August 11th, 2014 at 12:47 pm · Link
Free knowledge like this doesn’t just help, it promote deyrcoacm. Thank you.
August 7th, 2011 at 3:03 pm · Link
Sometimes…when you love someone, you just have to let them go. I like it – well done
August 7th, 2011 at 3:50 pm · Link
I agree with Bree – he needs to let her decide what she wants! Stubborn man.
August 7th, 2011 at 4:43 pm · Link
She just won’t take no for an answer. Wonderful Six!
August 7th, 2011 at 5:04 pm · Link
I read about a broken man who is trying to let go of her gently. The six are sad. I hope he comes to grip with her in mind, bein I am a romanticist.
August 7th, 2011 at 5:10 pm · Link
Love the conflict! Great six!
August 7th, 2011 at 9:01 pm · Link
I’m hoping she’ll speak up and take charge of the situation. Great six.
August 8th, 2011 at 12:47 am · Link
It’s so hard to reason with someone who is lost in a dream. Great six!
August 8th, 2011 at 6:51 am · Link
Oh, I like this and want to see where you’re taking it.
August 9th, 2011 at 12:05 pm · Link
I love the last line. Selflessness is sooo attractive. Too bad he doesn’t realize what a great catch he really is 🙂
August 9th, 2011 at 2:48 pm · Link