We live in different worlds. That’s the problem,” Chase said, pointing toward the arena full of fans chanting his name.

“No we don’t,” Reno whispered. “We live in one world, where you and I are the only people who matter.”

He shook his head. The only person who mattered was Reno, and her happiness depended on her moving on. “You’re destined for greater things than a tour bus.”

From Chase and Seduction, available at The Wild Rose Press Wilder Roses catalog

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28 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Sharita Lira
    August 7th, 2011 at 8:26 am · Link

    Nice six!

  2. Gayle Ramage
    August 7th, 2011 at 9:06 am · Link

    Aw, trying to let her down gently. 🙂

  3. Alix
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link

    Greater things than a tour bus, loved this line. Great six.

  4. Carrie Ann Ryan
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:17 am · Link

    But what does she want Chase!? Love your six!

  5. Kacey Hammell
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:38 am · Link

    ooh love it. he’s putting her first, but he should ask her what she wants first. need to see how this plays out. gr8 6 !

  6. Jean
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:40 am · Link

    Love how he’s looking after her, destined for greater things than a tour bus. Sweet, loving. Well done. Great six!

  7. Casea Major
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:46 am · Link

    Self-sacrifice the ultimate show of true love. As writers we seek to “show” our stories instead of tell. Well done. Nice Six.

  8. Mirriam
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:24 am · Link

    I like how he acknowledges her self-centeredness but also realizes her potential for more. Nice six.

  9. Taryn Kincaid
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:27 am · Link

    Nice conflict here.

    • Olivia
      August 11th, 2014 at 5:10 pm · Link

      Deadly accurate answer. You’ve hit the busylele!

  10. Mirriam
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:28 am · Link

    Bleh. Sorry! My fingers were moving too fast. Comment should read “Acknowledges her potential for more.” not sure where the first half came from.

  11. Lindsay
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:56 am · Link

    Nice six.

  12. Sam Crescent
    August 7th, 2011 at 12:22 pm · Link

    Great six

  13. Kathleen Grieve
    August 7th, 2011 at 12:39 pm · Link

    An underlying a very raw emotion shines through in this Six! Very NICELY done!

  14. Lisa Fox
    August 7th, 2011 at 1:25 pm · Link

    Aww, he loves her!

  15. Vivien Dean
    August 7th, 2011 at 1:36 pm · Link

    Man, this really got to me for such a short snippet. Must go look at the sale page now.

  16. Bree Younger
    August 7th, 2011 at 2:44 pm · Link

    It always pisses me off when one person wants to make the decisions for both. He needs to let her have a say!!

    • Deliverance
      August 11th, 2014 at 12:47 pm · Link

      Free knowledge like this doesn’t just help, it promote deyrcoacm. Thank you.

  17. Ben
    August 7th, 2011 at 3:03 pm · Link

    Sometimes…when you love someone, you just have to let them go. I like it – well done

  18. Sonya Clark
    August 7th, 2011 at 3:50 pm · Link

    I agree with Bree – he needs to let her decide what she wants! Stubborn man.

  19. Ray Sostre
    August 7th, 2011 at 4:43 pm · Link

    She just won’t take no for an answer. Wonderful Six!

  20. Pablo Michaels
    August 7th, 2011 at 5:04 pm · Link

    I read about a broken man who is trying to let go of her gently. The six are sad. I hope he comes to grip with her in mind, bein I am a romanticist.

  21. Kallypso Masters
    August 7th, 2011 at 5:10 pm · Link

    Love the conflict! Great six!

  22. Sandy Nachlinger
    August 7th, 2011 at 9:01 pm · Link

    I’m hoping she’ll speak up and take charge of the situation. Great six.

  23. Lauri J Owen
    August 8th, 2011 at 12:47 am · Link

    It’s so hard to reason with someone who is lost in a dream. Great six!

  24. jayel kaye
    August 8th, 2011 at 6:51 am · Link

    Oh, I like this and want to see where you’re taking it.

  25. melynda price
    August 9th, 2011 at 12:05 pm · Link

    I love the last line. Selflessness is sooo attractive. Too bad he doesn’t realize what a great catch he really is 🙂

  26. E. Jamie
    August 9th, 2011 at 2:48 pm · Link

    Great six!

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