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Six Sentence Sunday
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Chase sat slouched on the bed in his red boxer briefs, his head hanging low, his forearms resting on his thighs, and his hands pressed together between his knees. “Forgive me?” he asked quietly.
Tears formed in Reno’s eyes. This man was complex, temperamental, and maddeningly traditional, but he was hers. She walked to him, knelt in front of him, and took his hands.
He wouldn’t look her in the eye.
Kissing his palms, she whispered, “You can never do anything that I won’t forgive.”
From Chase and Seduction, available at The Wild Rose Press Wilder Roses catalog
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August 14th, 2011 at 8:51 am · Link
Awww, that’s so sweet!
August 14th, 2011 at 9:06 am · Link
I have tears in my eyes. Great six
August 14th, 2011 at 9:20 am · Link
I’m wondering what he is asking forgiveness for. Intriguing snippet. 🙂
August 14th, 2011 at 9:24 am · Link
Oh, I want to forgive him and I don’t even know what he’s done.
August 14th, 2011 at 10:25 am · Link
Aw. Poignant. (Love is never having to say you’re sorry!)
August 14th, 2011 at 10:47 am · Link
Sweet but…that last line could be trouble!! Never say never is my motto!!
August 14th, 2011 at 11:10 am · Link
Awesome and touching six sentences, but never is a loooong time. *smile*
August 14th, 2011 at 11:17 am · Link
Is this a promise she’s going to regret? Great six.
August 14th, 2011 at 11:47 am · Link
Sweet touching and I wanted more.
August 14th, 2011 at 11:58 am · Link
Aw, a humble hero. So happy she forgave him.
August 14th, 2011 at 12:48 pm · Link
Its sweet… But is it just me, or did she just give him a hall pass for saying that to him??? *Paranoid me*
August 14th, 2011 at 2:37 pm · Link
Beautiful visual of this scene. I fear she may regret that last line. Nice six.
August 14th, 2011 at 4:16 pm · Link
Lovely, lovely, lovely. I felt the emotion just from their postures. Good job.
August 14th, 2011 at 4:41 pm · Link
I love how humble Chase is in this scene. Reno’s making a big promise here, but something tells me she won’t regret it 🙂
August 14th, 2011 at 4:58 pm · Link
I bought this last week after seeing that excerpt, and this only confirms my decision as a right one. Thanks for sharing!
August 15th, 2011 at 9:53 am · Link
uh-oh. will she regret those words sometime?
August 15th, 2011 at 11:17 am · Link
Very poignant, well done. Loved it 🙂
August 15th, 2011 at 11:02 pm · Link
Very moving six!