Trace eased the screen door closed, not meeting her gaze. Removing his hat, he hung it on a coat rack next to the door. “It can wait.” He moved closer and slid his hands over her shoulders.

“Hold on,” Macy said, forcing herself back from the edge of seduction, taking a step back out of his grasp. “I want to know about these papers first.”

From my rewrite of Her Cowboy Stud

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18 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Taryn Kincaid
    August 28th, 2011 at 9:15 am · Link

    Edge of seduction is a great line!



  2. Angela S. Stone (@AngelaSStone)
    August 28th, 2011 at 9:30 am · Link

    Oooo fantastic! I want to know about these papers now too!!

    xx
    A.



  3. Melynda Price
    August 28th, 2011 at 9:39 am · Link

    Sounds like he’s trying to distract her. Very curious about what those papers say. Great six!



  4. Sharita Lira
    August 28th, 2011 at 10:55 am · Link

    Nicely done Randi



  5. Kacey Hammell
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:02 am · Link

    very nice. love the eye candy too. i’m intrigued.



  6. Bree Younger
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:09 am · Link

    The edge of seduction…love it!!



  7. Lucy Felthouse
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:10 am · Link

    Wow, well done. I liked it! Great six 🙂



  8. Sherry Gloag
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:14 am · Link

    So much in so little. like everyone else, ‘edge oof seduction..’ wonderful and what IS in those papers?



  9. Vivien Dean
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:45 am · Link

    Something tells me I’ll end up picking more than Chase and Seduction from reading your SSS’s, lol.



  10. Dawne Prochilo
    August 28th, 2011 at 12:05 pm · Link

    I’m thinking those ‘papers’ will create quite a conflict for these two- CAN’T Wait!!



  11. Monica Enderle Pierce
    August 28th, 2011 at 2:56 pm · Link

    Love how she steps back from the ‘edge of seduction’ to assert herself. That’s a heroine I can get into.



  12. Alix
    August 28th, 2011 at 5:44 pm · Link

    Back from the edge of seduction..Fantastic six!



  13. Carrie Ann Ryan
    August 28th, 2011 at 6:22 pm · Link

    Ooooohhh so good. Love your lines!



  14. Kerrianne
    August 28th, 2011 at 10:05 pm · Link

    Why do i want to say ‘Uh oh’? Great six xx



  15. Kathleen Grieve
    August 29th, 2011 at 4:33 am · Link

    Uh Oh! He may not get what he was looking for! LOL



  16. Kallypso Masters
    August 29th, 2011 at 7:46 am · Link

    It can WAIT? WTH? I don’t THINK so–and hope Trace is of a similar mind. Great Six!



  17. Pablo Michaels
    August 29th, 2011 at 9:34 am · Link

    Very good intro into his seduction for the woman he desires.



  18. 1000th.monkey
    August 29th, 2011 at 1:02 pm · Link

    So, he’s doing his best to change the subject? Sneaky, sneaky 🙂



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