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Trace eased the screen door closed, not meeting her gaze. Removing his hat, he hung it on a coat rack next to the door. “It can wait.” He moved closer and slid his hands over her shoulders.
“Hold on,” Macy said, forcing herself back from the edge of seduction, taking a step back out of his grasp. “I want to know about these papers first.”
From my rewrite of Her Cowboy Stud
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August 28th, 2011 at 9:15 am · Link
Edge of seduction is a great line!
August 28th, 2011 at 9:30 am · Link
Oooo fantastic! I want to know about these papers now too!!
xx
A.
August 28th, 2011 at 9:39 am · Link
Sounds like he’s trying to distract her. Very curious about what those papers say. Great six!
August 28th, 2011 at 10:55 am · Link
Nicely done Randi
August 28th, 2011 at 11:02 am · Link
very nice. love the eye candy too. i’m intrigued.
August 28th, 2011 at 11:09 am · Link
The edge of seduction…love it!!
August 28th, 2011 at 11:10 am · Link
Wow, well done. I liked it! Great six 🙂
August 28th, 2011 at 11:14 am · Link
So much in so little. like everyone else, ‘edge oof seduction..’ wonderful and what IS in those papers?
August 28th, 2011 at 11:45 am · Link
Something tells me I’ll end up picking more than Chase and Seduction from reading your SSS’s, lol.
August 28th, 2011 at 12:05 pm · Link
I’m thinking those ‘papers’ will create quite a conflict for these two- CAN’T Wait!!
August 28th, 2011 at 2:56 pm · Link
Love how she steps back from the ‘edge of seduction’ to assert herself. That’s a heroine I can get into.
August 28th, 2011 at 5:44 pm · Link
Back from the edge of seduction..Fantastic six!
August 28th, 2011 at 6:22 pm · Link
Ooooohhh so good. Love your lines!
August 28th, 2011 at 10:05 pm · Link
Why do i want to say ‘Uh oh’? Great six xx
August 29th, 2011 at 4:33 am · Link
Uh Oh! He may not get what he was looking for! LOL
August 29th, 2011 at 7:46 am · Link
It can WAIT? WTH? I don’t THINK so–and hope Trace is of a similar mind. Great Six!
August 29th, 2011 at 9:34 am · Link
Very good intro into his seduction for the woman he desires.
August 29th, 2011 at 1:02 pm · Link
So, he’s doing his best to change the subject? Sneaky, sneaky 🙂