From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting begins October 1!

Part 2 of 7

A tall blonde girl nearly toppled in, her arm raised for another knock. Her big, blue eyes opened wide when her fist stopped an inch short of his chin.

“Emma?” The night shift waitress at the diner. “Who let you onto the property?”

A flush of red crept up her neck. His nostrils flared as he caught the scent of blood.

Stop by next week for Part 3

Also, if you’d like to see more six-sentence posts, go to Six Sentence Sunday and check them out!

15 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday – Part 2 of 7”

  1. JoAnne Kenrick
    September 25th, 2011 at 9:30 am · Link

    Good luck in the ARe contest xxx

  2. Dawne Prochilo
    September 25th, 2011 at 9:50 am · Link

    You had me at the picture with the SSS- damn…whatta a guy! Great SSS too and good luck with the contest

  3. Pablo Michaels
    September 25th, 2011 at 9:52 am · Link

    Great scene. Best wishes for the contest.

  4. Ray Sostre
    September 25th, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link

    Nice scene! Good luck in the ARe contest.

  5. Roz Lee
    September 25th, 2011 at 10:31 am · Link

    I’m with Dawne – that cowboy can bite me anytime! Great six, too! LOL Best of luck with the contest.

  6. Joanne Stewart
    September 25th, 2011 at 10:48 am · Link

    Yup, I’m kind of stuck on that cowboy myself. lol Great six! Good luck with the contest!

  7. Lindsay
    September 25th, 2011 at 12:09 pm · Link

    Another six which is drawing me more and more into the story

  8. Ana Hart
    September 25th, 2011 at 2:14 pm · Link

    Great six! Short, well-written, and to the point.

  9. Cherie Marks
    September 25th, 2011 at 3:24 pm · Link

    Oooh, great lead-in for a scene. Wonder what’s happened. Great six!

  10. Sharita Lira
    September 25th, 2011 at 3:37 pm · Link

    Wow, nicely done! Great description!

  11. Vivien Dean
    September 25th, 2011 at 5:20 pm · Link

    Good luck in the contest, but from the look of it, you don’t need it! 🙂

  12. Taryn Kincaid
    September 25th, 2011 at 6:31 pm · Link

    InIntriguing. Good luck with the contest.

  13. Lani Rhea
    September 26th, 2011 at 11:51 am · Link

    Ooh, intriguing! Love your six!

  14. 1000th.monkey
    September 27th, 2011 at 10:16 am · Link

    Very intriguing 🙂 I’ll definitely stop in for the next part 🙂

  15. Gem Sivad
    October 2nd, 2011 at 6:49 am · Link

    Great scene set up…the scent of blood left me intrigued for sure.

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