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Six Sentence Sunday – Part 2 of 7
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From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting begins October 1!
Part 2 of 7
A tall blonde girl nearly toppled in, her arm raised for another knock. Her big, blue eyes opened wide when her fist stopped an inch short of his chin.
“Emma?” The night shift waitress at the diner. “Who let you onto the property?”
A flush of red crept up her neck. His nostrils flared as he caught the scent of blood.
Stop by next week for Part 3
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September 25th, 2011 at 9:30 am · Link
Good luck in the ARe contest xxx
September 25th, 2011 at 9:50 am · Link
You had me at the picture with the SSS- damn…whatta a guy! Great SSS too and good luck with the contest
September 25th, 2011 at 9:52 am · Link
Great scene. Best wishes for the contest.
September 25th, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link
Nice scene! Good luck in the ARe contest.
September 25th, 2011 at 10:31 am · Link
I’m with Dawne – that cowboy can bite me anytime! Great six, too! LOL Best of luck with the contest.
September 25th, 2011 at 10:48 am · Link
Yup, I’m kind of stuck on that cowboy myself. lol Great six! Good luck with the contest!
September 25th, 2011 at 12:09 pm · Link
Another six which is drawing me more and more into the story
September 25th, 2011 at 2:14 pm · Link
Great six! Short, well-written, and to the point.
September 25th, 2011 at 3:24 pm · Link
Oooh, great lead-in for a scene. Wonder what’s happened. Great six!
September 25th, 2011 at 3:37 pm · Link
Wow, nicely done! Great description!
September 25th, 2011 at 5:20 pm · Link
Good luck in the contest, but from the look of it, you don’t need it! 🙂
September 25th, 2011 at 6:31 pm · Link
InIntriguing. Good luck with the contest.
September 26th, 2011 at 11:51 am · Link
Ooh, intriguing! Love your six!
September 27th, 2011 at 10:16 am · Link
Very intriguing 🙂 I’ll definitely stop in for the next part 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 6:49 am · Link
Great scene set up…the scent of blood left me intrigued for sure.