From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting is open! Stop by All Romance eBooks to read the entire short story (as well as the other 31 finalists) and vote for the story you like best. Of course, I’d really appreciate your vote!

Part 3 of 7

“I snuck in through the gate after your foreman left.”

He looked past her. The sun was down, the yard lights glared from the barn, and a bike lay at the foot of the porch steps. Was she stalking him? Ironic. He usually did the stalking.

Stop by next week for Part 4

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40 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday – Part 3 of 7”

  1. Vivien Dean
    October 2nd, 2011 at 2:17 am · Link

    Ha, I loved the twist on the last line. Well done!



  2. Serena Bell
    October 2nd, 2011 at 7:55 am · Link

    Love it! I like the double entendre with the gate (intentional or un- :-)), and I just plain old love the concept of vampire-cowboy-erotic-romance.



  3. Alix
    October 2nd, 2011 at 7:59 am · Link

    Love love loved his thoughts about her stalking, I thoroughly enjoyed his honesty. Great six!



  4. Dawne Prochilo
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:01 am · Link

    Damn you and your cowboys Randi…makes me wanna get out a hat, a bandana and ride em hard- great 6



  5. Sarah Grimm
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:36 am · Link

    Love the last line! I’ll be checking this one out. Sounds like a fantastic read!



  6. Sam Crescent
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:50 am · Link

    I loved the tease you’ve left me with. Looking forward to next week.



  7. Laura
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:51 am · Link

    I love the twist at the end. Great Six!

    Laura



  8. Eleri Stone
    October 2nd, 2011 at 9:01 am · Link

    Hmm. Wonder how he likes the tables being turned.



  9. Carrie Ann Ryan
    October 2nd, 2011 at 9:11 am · Link

    Oh too teasing! I want to know what happen next



  10. Dee Carney
    October 2nd, 2011 at 9:36 am · Link

    Oh…things are about to get very, very interesting!



  11. Cara Bristol
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link

    Love the last line. Funny & reveals so much of his character.



  12. Joanne Stewart
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:22 am · Link

    lol Love that last line!



  13. Cynthia Arsuaga
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:30 am · Link

    Great six!



  14. Cherie Marks
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:49 am · Link

    The tables are turning. Great six!



  15. Bonni Sansom
    October 2nd, 2011 at 11:05 am · Link

    Very intriguing six. Can’t wait til next week.



  16. Taryn Kincaid
    October 2nd, 2011 at 11:37 am · Link

    Great!



  17. Jynnipher Olbert
    October 2nd, 2011 at 11:57 am · Link

    Great six! Off to read the first two πŸ™‚



  18. J.C. Martin
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:10 pm · Link

    the stalker becoming the stalked? Interesting. πŸ™‚



  19. Siobhan Muir
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:18 pm · Link

    Oh, I like that a lot. Turn the tables on the hunter! Great six. πŸ™‚



  20. Piper
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:25 pm · Link

    I love this six. This last line was awesome, rich. Great work. πŸ™‚



  21. Monica Enderle Pierce
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:28 pm · Link

    ROFL! Great turn-about and a fun sense of humor.



  22. Lindsay
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:35 pm · Link

    Great six



  23. sue
    October 2nd, 2011 at 12:40 pm · Link

    Got me hooked – I’ll be back – nice visuals



  24. Sharita Lira
    October 2nd, 2011 at 1:30 pm · Link

    Nicely done, I voted for you!



  25. Liz Crowe
    October 2nd, 2011 at 1:51 pm · Link

    cool! I want to know more…
    liz



  26. Paula Martin
    October 2nd, 2011 at 2:05 pm · Link

    Wonder how he likes the tables being turned on him? Good six!



  27. Aimee Laine
    October 2nd, 2011 at 2:16 pm · Link

    Oooh, the stalker gets stalked. πŸ™‚



  28. Lorien Velez
    October 2nd, 2011 at 2:58 pm · Link

    Love the last line. Fun and sexy. πŸ˜‰



  29. Jp Archer
    October 2nd, 2011 at 4:33 pm · Link

    Good six. I will try to get over to the contest and read them. I have been tagging along for a couple weeks now and I into the story. Can’t wait to read the whole thing.



  30. Sarah Ballance
    October 2nd, 2011 at 4:35 pm · Link

    Oh, love the end! And a good stalking, too. Great six!



  31. Jenna Jaxon
    October 2nd, 2011 at 5:48 pm · Link

    A bit cocky, but I like that in a hot cowboy. So he’s a stalker, usually. Good to change things up occasionally! LOL Great six.



  32. Lisa Fox
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:17 pm · Link

    Ha! Love the six. I can’t wait for part four!



  33. Ana Hart
    October 2nd, 2011 at 8:37 pm · Link

    Bahaha. I love his inner monologue. Great six!



  34. Cassandra Carr
    October 2nd, 2011 at 9:48 pm · Link

    Ha! Love those last couple of lines…



  35. Kathleen Grieve
    October 3rd, 2011 at 12:36 am · Link

    Love a super sexy cowboy! The last line was my favorite. Shows his sense of humor!



  36. Jennifer Johnson
    October 3rd, 2011 at 6:57 am · Link

    Very nice. You pulled me in with only six sentences.



  37. Barb
    October 3rd, 2011 at 9:42 am · Link

    Tee-hee! Women can be stalkers too, right? Teach him a lesson! πŸ˜€



  38. 1000th.monkey
    October 3rd, 2011 at 7:06 pm · Link

    …I do get the shivers when I read ‘stalking’…



  39. E. Jamie
    October 4th, 2011 at 10:52 am · Link

    Yummy six!



  40. Brien Michaels
    October 5th, 2011 at 8:55 am · Link

    Well at least he admits to his stalkerness. Nice six!



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