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Six Sentence Sunday – Part 3 of 7
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From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting is open! Stop by All Romance eBooks to read the entire short story (as well as the other 31 finalists) and vote for the story you like best. Of course, I’d really appreciate your vote!
Part 3 of 7
“I snuck in through the gate after your foreman left.”
He looked past her. The sun was down, the yard lights glared from the barn, and a bike lay at the foot of the porch steps. Was she stalking him? Ironic. He usually did the stalking.
Stop by next week for Part 4
Also, if you’d like to see more six-sentence posts, go to Six Sentence Sunday and check them out!
October 2nd, 2011 at 2:17 am · Link
Ha, I loved the twist on the last line. Well done!
October 2nd, 2011 at 7:55 am · Link
Love it! I like the double entendre with the gate (intentional or un- :-)), and I just plain old love the concept of vampire-cowboy-erotic-romance.
October 2nd, 2011 at 7:59 am · Link
Love love loved his thoughts about her stalking, I thoroughly enjoyed his honesty. Great six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:01 am · Link
Damn you and your cowboys Randi…makes me wanna get out a hat, a bandana and ride em hard- great 6
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:36 am · Link
Love the last line! I’ll be checking this one out. Sounds like a fantastic read!
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:50 am · Link
I loved the tease you’ve left me with. Looking forward to next week.
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:51 am · Link
I love the twist at the end. Great Six!
Laura
October 2nd, 2011 at 9:01 am · Link
Hmm. Wonder how he likes the tables being turned.
October 2nd, 2011 at 9:11 am · Link
Oh too teasing! I want to know what happen next
October 2nd, 2011 at 9:36 am · Link
Oh…things are about to get very, very interesting!
October 2nd, 2011 at 10:00 am · Link
Love the last line. Funny & reveals so much of his character.
October 2nd, 2011 at 10:22 am · Link
lol Love that last line!
October 2nd, 2011 at 10:30 am · Link
Great six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 10:49 am · Link
The tables are turning. Great six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 11:05 am · Link
Very intriguing six. Can’t wait til next week.
October 2nd, 2011 at 11:37 am · Link
Great!
October 2nd, 2011 at 11:57 am · Link
Great six! Off to read the first two 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:10 pm · Link
the stalker becoming the stalked? Interesting. 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:18 pm · Link
Oh, I like that a lot. Turn the tables on the hunter! Great six. 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:25 pm · Link
I love this six. This last line was awesome, rich. Great work. 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:28 pm · Link
ROFL! Great turn-about and a fun sense of humor.
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:35 pm · Link
Great six
October 2nd, 2011 at 12:40 pm · Link
Got me hooked – I’ll be back – nice visuals
October 2nd, 2011 at 1:30 pm · Link
Nicely done, I voted for you!
October 2nd, 2011 at 1:51 pm · Link
cool! I want to know more…
liz
October 2nd, 2011 at 2:05 pm · Link
Wonder how he likes the tables being turned on him? Good six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 2:16 pm · Link
Oooh, the stalker gets stalked. 🙂
October 2nd, 2011 at 2:58 pm · Link
Love the last line. Fun and sexy. 😉
October 2nd, 2011 at 4:33 pm · Link
Good six. I will try to get over to the contest and read them. I have been tagging along for a couple weeks now and I into the story. Can’t wait to read the whole thing.
October 2nd, 2011 at 4:35 pm · Link
Oh, love the end! And a good stalking, too. Great six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 5:48 pm · Link
A bit cocky, but I like that in a hot cowboy. So he’s a stalker, usually. Good to change things up occasionally! LOL Great six.
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:17 pm · Link
Ha! Love the six. I can’t wait for part four!
October 2nd, 2011 at 8:37 pm · Link
Bahaha. I love his inner monologue. Great six!
October 2nd, 2011 at 9:48 pm · Link
Ha! Love those last couple of lines…
October 3rd, 2011 at 12:36 am · Link
Love a super sexy cowboy! The last line was my favorite. Shows his sense of humor!
October 3rd, 2011 at 6:57 am · Link
Very nice. You pulled me in with only six sentences.
October 3rd, 2011 at 9:42 am · Link
Tee-hee! Women can be stalkers too, right? Teach him a lesson! 😀
October 3rd, 2011 at 7:06 pm · Link
…I do get the shivers when I read ‘stalking’…
October 4th, 2011 at 10:52 am · Link
Yummy six!
October 5th, 2011 at 8:55 am · Link
Well at least he admits to his stalkerness. Nice six!