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Six Sentence Sunday – Part 5 of 7
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From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting is open! Stop by All Romance eBooks to read the entire short story and vote for the story you like best. Of course, I’d really appreciate your vote!
Part 5 of 7
He leaned closer.
She stepped back, and he sensed a small burst of fear mingling with her determination.
“Please, Kade, hear what I have to say.”
He nodded. They’d talked a dozen times when he went to town for a late night meal. Sometimes she’d sit with him if things were slow.
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October 16th, 2011 at 6:33 am · Link
Love a sexy cowboy! I can feel something is about to happen here. The hero comes across as rather dark and a bit dangerous. Great six!
October 16th, 2011 at 8:38 am · Link
More please! I want to know what she has to say!
October 16th, 2011 at 8:43 am · Link
I want more now
October 16th, 2011 at 9:31 am · Link
Great!
October 16th, 2011 at 10:31 am · Link
I was mesmerized by the guy in the hat…mmm. Great six.
October 16th, 2011 at 10:40 am · Link
Oh what will happen! You always leave me hooked and hanging! Love it!
October 16th, 2011 at 10:53 am · Link
Like her subtle response to the danger and the fact that she didn’t let it stop her from talking with him before.
October 16th, 2011 at 12:44 pm · Link
Hope things are going well in the contest! Thanks for sharing. š
October 16th, 2011 at 6:09 pm · Link
Good luck in the contest. I like the tension you’ve created in these six.
October 16th, 2011 at 6:31 pm · Link
Nice!
October 16th, 2011 at 7:33 pm · Link
Nice. Enjoyed it. Looking forward to next week.
October 16th, 2011 at 10:36 pm · Link
Hot cowboy. Mmm.
October 17th, 2011 at 2:56 pm · Link
Really nice dynamics between the two of them š
…one small thing, because the line of dialogue is hooked into his reaction of noting her fear, it seems like he’s the one saying that line. Could you tweak it so it’s a little clearer that she’s the one speaking?