From my All Romance eBook Just One Bite Short Story Contest Finalist THIS COWBOY BITES — Voting is open! Stop by All Romance eBooks to read the entire short story and vote for the story you like best. Of course, I’d really appreciate your vote!

Part 5 of 7

He leaned closer.

She stepped back, and he sensed a small burst of fear mingling with her determination.

“Please, Kade, hear what I have to say.”

He nodded. They’d talked a dozen times when he went to town for a late night meal. Sometimes she’d sit with him if things were slow.

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13 comments to “Six Sentence Sunday – Part 5 of 7”

  1. Angela Guillaume
    October 16th, 2011 at 6:33 am · Link

    Love a sexy cowboy! I can feel something is about to happen here. The hero comes across as rather dark and a bit dangerous. Great six!

  2. Sarah Grimm
    October 16th, 2011 at 8:38 am · Link

    More please! I want to know what she has to say!

  3. Sam Crescent
    October 16th, 2011 at 8:43 am · Link

    I want more now

  4. Laura Kaye
    October 16th, 2011 at 9:31 am · Link


  5. Krystal Wade
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:31 am · Link

    I was mesmerized by the guy in the hat…mmm. Great six.

  6. Carrie Ann Ryan
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:40 am · Link

    Oh what will happen! You always leave me hooked and hanging! Love it!

  7. Monica Enderle Pierce
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:53 am · Link

    Like her subtle response to the danger and the fact that she didn’t let it stop her from talking with him before.

  8. Vivien Dean
    October 16th, 2011 at 12:44 pm · Link

    Hope things are going well in the contest! Thanks for sharing. 🙂

  9. Gem Sivad
    October 16th, 2011 at 6:09 pm · Link

    Good luck in the contest. I like the tension you’ve created in these six.

  10. Alexia Reed
    October 16th, 2011 at 6:31 pm · Link


  11. Cara Bristol
    October 16th, 2011 at 7:33 pm · Link

    Nice. Enjoyed it. Looking forward to next week.

  12. Taryn Kincaid
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:36 pm · Link

    Hot cowboy. Mmm.

  13. 1000th.monkey
    October 17th, 2011 at 2:56 pm · Link

    Really nice dynamics between the two of them 🙂

    …one small thing, because the line of dialogue is hooked into his reaction of noting her fear, it seems like he’s the one saying that line. Could you tweak it so it’s a little clearer that she’s the one speaking?

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